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Review for cutterpillow

Story Title: She's All That
Author: cutterpillow
Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/SAT/
Status: Complete
Reviewer: Markie

Title: 5/5
I loved your title.. I thought it would be something on the lines of like a popular girl and what not, but it wasnt and it made me intrigued as to what the story was going to be about..

Poster/Background: 9/10
I love the poster and the background matches it wonderfully! I think this is one of the best posters i have seen.. Its very lovely.

Forewords: 5/5
The foreword was good! You explained what the story was going to be about and the characters! The forewords also had me curious as to how the story would go and what the people would be like.

Plot: 14/15
Ah yes the plot is one that everyone loves.. It is easy to guess what would happen but it still held its own making it enjoyable to read.

Flow: 9/10
The Flow is good, now your proubably wondering why the heck am i giving you an 9? Well.. To be honest i really wished it could have been longer.. but you got to the things that needed to be explained and it was pulled together wonderfully, i Just wished i could read a little more of the story.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 13/15
Spelling was great but the grammer is not, but you said that english is not your first language so its understandable, really it is not as bad others writing, i could understand it perfectly because they were not big mistakes.

Characterization: 10/10
Yes you gave Rosa real personalitly and Haru-chan well i loved him, the way you described the characters really made me excited and happy.

Originality: 9/10
Well, It is original i can tell. Everyone loves these kinds of storys im pretty sure they do! I mean i do, who couldnt? Even though there are many of these kinds of plots and such This was really original making it very seperate from the rest.


Writing style: 10/10
I loved your writing style! Easy to understand and making it more enjoyable to read. I think everyone should write this way.

Overall enjoyment: 10/10
Yes i enjoyed it! It was really wonderful to read, I found myself laughing when she was painting the bike and Haru ran into her and she blamed It all on him.. Really it takes alot for me to actually laugh out loud and smile like a dang Idiot. I Hope you continue to write these wonderful storys and i hope you like the review.

Overall score: 94/100

Posted by Anonymous at 8:18 AM on Tuesday, September 21, 1993 and received 0