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Review For Shil

Story Title:A Perfect Sanctuary [ONE-SHOT]
Author: Shil
Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/akshiil03/
Status: Completed
Reviewer: Ms. McFartPants

Note: I may not know the author and vice versa. I am here to review your fan fiction as honest as I can in order for you to improve. Irritating words and eye-sore critics may appear in this; directly or indirectly. But all of that is for no other means, except to aid you in improving yourself. My POV may differ from others. I sincerely apologize if my review contains any offensive comments and criticisms. Thank you. ^^

**Sorry, I'm quite busy right now so I kinda rushed your review. Hope you forgive me! :D


Title: 4/5
; Your title is just the perfect fit for your story. And it's quite appealing.

Poster/Background: 10/10
; I really love your poster and background.It's a perfect match for your plot so keep up the good work!

Forewords: 3/5
; The forewords wasn't that good. You didn't really introduce the whole cast or the main leads. I love the way you did with the other stuffs.

Plot: 13/15
; Well, I seriously loved the plot.. It was awesome and hope to read more from you, author!

Flow: 9/10
; The story's flow wasn't that fast nor too slow. It was perfect.

Spelling/Grammer/Vocabulary: 13/15
; At first, I thought that it would be horrible because you told us in the forewords that English isn't your first language. But then when I started reading, wooahh! No grammar mistakes. Well, I saw some wrong usage of punctuation marks.

Characterization: 8/10
; The characters weren't really that good, but I must admit, I loved their roles. It was just too cliché, the same with your plot.

Originality: 6/10
; The plot was a little cliché. I've read a lot of stories with the same plot with yours.

Writing style: 8/10
; I LOVE IT! Too speechless to say anything..

Overall enjoyment: 10/10
; x.o.x.o

Overall score: 84/100

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