Review For 42gami
Author: 42gami
Link: http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/42gami/
Status: Ongoing
Reviewer: Markie
Title: 5/5 I think the title goes with it good! I probably would have chose this title also!
Poster/Background: 6/10 Eh, I didn't really like it.. its too simple.. I think it would look good with something more neater.
Forewords: 4/5 The forewords were good, It explained what needed to be explained, all forewords are is a brief summery and that's what you did!
Plot: 13/15 Yes the plot was good, I haven't read any story with this kind of plot, making it more exciting for me, I always love something new.
Flow: 9/10 I thought your Flow Is good, You don't linger and that's what i hate, you also didn't go to fast.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 12/15 The grammar, and spelling was pretty bad, Like for example
'I putted it on' It should be 'I put it on' Things like that i noticed were in your story frequently, sometimes Like me for example tend to do that when they type to fast causing them to make minor mistakes like that. So i would just reread your Chapters before Posting making sure the sentences make sense.
Characterization: 9/10 I thought the way you portrayed the characters was good, how Changmin freaks out about what kind of person the fan girl is. There personality's made me laugh.
Orginality: 8/10 well, I have never read a story like this but i have seen some like this But it was original making me enjoy it a lot. I cant wait to see what unfolds in your story. And her background was quite original if i might say so.
Writing style: 9/10 I liked it, Even though there were quite a few errors in your writing it did not stop me from liking and understanding it.
Overall enjoyment: 8/10 I Enjoyed it! what takes away points is the errors in the story, but i think words matter more then numbers because i did enjoy it, I love story's that can make me laugh and this one did.It also made me curious as to what will happen to Rin!
Overall score: 77/100